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This was from my first battle at Void. I learned a lot from this. I'll get better. Lemme know what you think.

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Daily Deviation

Given 2009-05-19

Corry vs Casimir 1-4 by ~anthonybaiz may not represent the maker's full abilities, but it offers many things worth lingering on: the excellent representation of movement and speed, how to suggest a complex background, variety in camera angles and an atmospheric palette. and an intriguing story beginning! (Featured by ^Cedarseed)

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:iconmytharcana:
This is quite a unique strip and I look the soft look of the art in this a lot! Great colors and nice layout and lots of action! Excellent work and congratulations on the DD!

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:iconscorchdady:
oh! nice!

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:iconfunky-yazz-jaz:
the last panel is awesome. And the perspective in the first.
GOOD WORK!
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:iconphotohouse:
Congratulations on the DD!!

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Many stockphotos for your art: [link]


P.s. I will watch you back if you watch me! And I will also favorite your work you make with one of my photos :D.
:iconneofunka:
There's something... I don't know if I can explain, but I'll try.

The quality of drawing (by quality I mean the simplicity level) and colouring differs too much. The lines are maybe too simple or the colouring is too deep. The inking is a little bit diffuse, it's noticeable the mix in photoshop and the paper.

My advice is : Ink everything at the paper, or at photoshop. If you do in photoshop, use a less blurry contoured brush. Watch out for the background's palette, they may hide your front-action in the vignettes.

Here, now everyone can flame me at will, now that I critizised.

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:icon00alisa00:
Congratulations for the DD! :)
:icondans-magic:
It was helpful, not harmful. People need to accept alittle critique now and then, it only helps them grow

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:icon3dmundo:
the layout fits perfectly

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:iconindigo-ocean:
Interesting comic, and congrats on the DD. The only thing I'd be mindful of in future are homonyms (to/too, your/you're) of which you have a few in here.
Good work though.

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:iconanthonybaiz:
thanks :).
I get that a lot. I didn't do so good in English <sniff>....is it obvious?

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